Here's one!:
These kids accidently discover who their parent's killers are, and try to avenge them, but the bad-guys want them, instead! So they have-to go-on the run to Vegas [don't ask me why!?]to escape the badies! The ending is at an Oreo factory, that explodes with the bad-guys in it! [They live, but the Cops get 'em !]

I have an idea for a film which I've played with for a while;

A cop is on the trail of a killer that hides his tracks really well. He gets more and more frustrated as he believes he gets much, much closer with each killing.

The murderer calls him on the phone, sends him e-mails, mocking his failure at catching him.

Eventually, his wife is murdered, but during the fight with her, he gets knocked unconscious and in his slumbering state, (here's the twsit) realises that he is in fact the killer.

Oh yes. I rock.

Reply to Vintagefantasy's question!:
Oh, they arrive in vegas at the end, here's the full story!:
These kids discover who killed their parents, and decide to keep it secret. But they recive an E-Mail from the bad-guys saying that they know that the kids know it was them, so the kids flee town in a stolen hippie van. But the kid who is driving falls asleep in the middle of driving down a highway, and the car goes off-of a cliff, they jump-out just before it goes over. They have-to hitch a ride at the nearest gas station, but the bad-guys are there, too! The kids hide from them behind a cab, while the main kid goes-out, and covers the car in nitrus oxide, and sets fire to it. They jump in the cab, and drive away just before the gas station explodes! Their car breacks-diwn in the middle of the desert, and they have to walk for a while, but the bad-guys see-the kids on the road, and try to shoot them, but the kids jump-in the back of an Oreo truck, and the bad-guys get on the hood of his car, and shots one of the kids in the arm! The truck eventually arrives in Vegas, and backs-in to an Oreo factory!

im going to call my movie "Birth of a Nation"...

COOLHAND

im going to call my movie "Birth of a Nation"...

what is it about?

vintagefantasy

COOLHAND

im going to call my movie "Birth of a Nation"...

what is it about?

I doubt he's being serious. That movie was already done by DW Griffith, and it was rather... controversial.

I see some nice ideas in here. I hope greedy coporate movie exces don't read this and steal your ideas. :shock:

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Reply to Vintagefantasy's question!:
Oh, they arrive in vegas at the end, here's the full story!:
These kids discover who killed their parents, and decide to keep it secret. But they recive an E-Mail from the bad-guys saying that they know that the kids know it was them, so the kids flee town in a stolen hippie van. But the kid who is driving falls asleep in the middle of driving down a highway, and the car goes off-of a cliff, they jump-out just before it goes over. They have-to hitch a ride at the nearest gas station, but the bad-guys are there, too! The kids hide from them behind a cab, while the main kid goes-out, and covers the car in nitrus oxide, and sets fire to it. They jump in the cab, and drive away just before the gas station explodes! Their car breacks-diwn in the middle of the desert, and they have to walk for a while, but the bad-guys see-the kids on the road, and try to shoot them, but the kids jump-in the back of an Oreo truck, and the bad-guys get on the hood of his car, and shots one of the kids in the arm! The truck eventually arrives in Vegas, and backs-in to an Oreo factory!

wow that was crazy, thanks for all the info. however you seem to switch from story to script
alittle bit. You start with the kids in a hippie van, then they get caught and they burn down the car and the gas station. But the oreo factory seems to be half of the bulk that you wrote down.
when the oreo factory is the finale.

what happens when the kids are in the hippie van? What misadventures do they have?
You need some comedy in there somewhere. If it is a childrens movie. Now maybe there is no comedy. But there still is a small gap between the hippie van and the gas station that needs alittle of story to go along with it.

Now this can be only four or five sentences long, it doesn't have to be two paragraphs. It also may help just to leave the oreo factory out because it sounds like you have that part down.
unless you want the bulk of the story to take place in an oreo factory. which could also be fun.

thanks again for your grand response, and I look forward to hear your comments to what I just wrote.

vintagefantasy

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Reply to Vintagefantasy's question!:
Oh, they arrive in vegas at the end, here's the full story!:
These kids discover who killed their parents, and decide to keep it secret. But they recive an E-Mail from the bad-guys saying that they know that the kids know it was them, so the kids flee town in a stolen hippie van. But the kid who is driving falls asleep in the middle of driving down a highway, and the car goes off-of a cliff, they jump-out just before it goes over. They have-to hitch a ride at the nearest gas station, but the bad-guys are there, too! The kids hide from them behind a cab, while the main kid goes-out, and covers the car in nitrus oxide, and sets fire to it. They jump in the cab, and drive away just before the gas station explodes! Their car breacks-diwn in the middle of the desert, and they have to walk for a while, but the bad-guys see-the kids on the road, and try to shoot them, but the kids jump-in the back of an Oreo truck, and the bad-guys get on the hood of his car, and shots one of the kids in the arm! The truck eventually arrives in Vegas, and backs-in to an Oreo factory!

wow that was crazy, thanks for all the info. however you seem to switch from story to script
alittle bit. You start with the kids in a hippie van, then they get caught and they burn down the car and the gas station. But the oreo factory seems to be half of the bulk that you wrote down.
when the oreo factory is the finale.

what happens when the kids are in the hippie van? What misadventures do they have?
You need some comedy in there somewhere. If it is a childrens movie. Now maybe there is no comedy. But there still is a small gap between the hippie van and the gas station that needs alittle of story to go along with it.

Now this can be only four or five sentences long, it doesn't have to be two paragraphs. It also may help just to leave the oreo factory out because it sounds like you have that part down.
unless you want the bulk of the story to take place in an oreo factory. which could also be fun.

thanks again for your grand response, and I look forward to hear your comments to what I just wrote.

Thanks, it's meant to be a PG-13, or 12 over here in England. I will tell ya now, the ending is kinda stolen from "Child's Play 2"! Before the car goin' over the cliff, the kids visit the grand canyon, and the bad guys, who have follewd them there, try to kill the kids, but they escape, and the bad guys are arrested. The kids stop off at a tavern for directions, and see on the News on the T.V. that the bad guys have escaped from prison, and are tracking the kids down! They go out the tavern, and jump in the car, and head for Vegas. It's there that he falls asleep, the car goes off the cliff, and the bad-guys are at the gas station, all the rest.
So, yes there is a little more between the parts you mentioned, and yes, it is a comedy!

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vintagefantasy

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Reply to Vintagefantasy's question!:
Oh, they arrive in vegas at the end, here's the full story!:
These kids discover who killed their parents, and decide to keep it secret. But they recive an E-Mail from the bad-guys saying that they know that the kids know it was them, so the kids flee town in a stolen hippie van. But the kid who is driving falls asleep in the middle of driving down a highway, and the car goes off-of a cliff, they jump-out just before it goes over. They have-to hitch a ride at the nearest gas station, but the bad-guys are there, too! The kids hide from them behind a cab, while the main kid goes-out, and covers the car in nitrus oxide, and sets fire to it. They jump in the cab, and drive away just before the gas station explodes! Their car breacks-diwn in the middle of the desert, and they have to walk for a while, but the bad-guys see-the kids on the road, and try to shoot them, but the kids jump-in the back of an Oreo truck, and the bad-guys get on the hood of his car, and shots one of the kids in the arm! The truck eventually arrives in Vegas, and backs-in to an Oreo factory!

wow that was crazy, thanks for all the info. however you seem to switch from story to script
alittle bit. You start with the kids in a hippie van, then they get caught and they burn down the car and the gas station. But the oreo factory seems to be half of the bulk that you wrote down.
when the oreo factory is the finale.

what happens when the kids are in the hippie van? What misadventures do they have?
You need some comedy in there somewhere. If it is a childrens movie. Now maybe there is no comedy. But there still is a small gap between the hippie van and the gas station that needs alittle of story to go along with it.

Now this can be only four or five sentences long, it doesn't have to be two paragraphs. It also may help just to leave the oreo factory out because it sounds like you have that part down.
unless you want the bulk of the story to take place in an oreo factory. which could also be fun.

thanks again for your grand response, and I look forward to hear your comments to what I just wrote.

Thanks, it's meant to be a PG-13, or 12 over here in England. I will tell ya now, the ending is kinda stolen from "Child's Play 2"! Before the car goin' over the cliff, the kids visit the grand canyon, and the bad guys, who have follewd them there, try to kill the kids, but they escape, and the bad guys are arrested. The kids stop off at a tavern for directions, and see on the News on the T.V. that the bad guys have escaped from prison, and are tracking the kids down! They go out the tavern, and jump in the car, and head for Vegas. It's there that he falls asleep, the car goes off the cliff, and the bad-guys are at the gas station, all the rest.
So, yes there is a little more between the parts you mentioned, and yes, it is a comedy!

not a bad start, you could really go somewhere with this,
so you are from england huh, I have made it a goal in my life to go there sometime, what do you think of jolly old england? It sounds like it would be fun to see the difference between america and england. I also wanted to go see Ireland as well.

England is rater good, my dad was American, but he died in the 9/11 tradedgy.
The bad thing is, all the kids in England swear, and use words like fu*k, and cu*t! I don't though, there are only 2 people in my class at school that don't!
I like mostly American T.V., and Movies, there is only 1 English T.V. show that I like!
I have always wanted to be in films scince being 3 years old, and no, I don't mind if movie excs steal my ideas on 3 conditions:
1- Michael Eisner [He's head of the Disney company!] must not steal my ideas and turn them into a G-rated movie starring them twins from that Zack and Cody show!
2- They must not be made into T.V. movies!
and finally...
3- Make sure I am invited to the world premier and shindig!
That's all!

Right now, I'm working on a political thriller!