Thread: I Couldn't find a place to post this.

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    • 5 years 7 months ago
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    I'm an Edgar Allan poe fan, and a Halloween fan.

    This year thought Id honor poe with a poe style poem that took me a while and several drafts to compose.

    Be burtal. Poe would :p

    [CENTER]I’ve enraged traumatic furry, Deaths dark dead hand, is now my jury,
    With many restraints, in various numbers, He even chained me to the floor!
    As I ranted, nearly raving, my blood runs cold, Deaths death hand raising!!

    Charged with crimes and sins, that could chill you, to the very core.
    screams and cries for justice echo, in every hallway, on every floor.
    Crystal clearly I remember, I blazed that place to coals and ember!!

    Each separate flying Sparkle, shining ,like endless flames on a brilliant firey shore.
    I think , sometimes I do feel sorrow!, It's true!!!, If only, I could borrow,,,,,, time....
    Deaths dark dead hand does claim,,,,, another more...[/CENTER]
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    • 5 years 4 months ago
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    Very nicely written! Loved it!
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    • 5 years 4 months ago
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    May want to change the spelling of fury. It's making me think of poorly drawn anthropomorphic beasts beating on you.
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    • 5 years 4 months ago
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    You may want to capitalize "Poe" too.
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    • 5 years 4 months ago
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    and burtal
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    • 5 years 4 months ago
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    AND replace the commas with periods in the fourth paragraph.


    Just teasing. I read some of Edgar Allan Poe's poetry a couple weeks ago, so I got to say yours is pretty good! Do continue writing!
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    • 5 years 4 months ago
    • Posts: 1982
    Quote by RetroxBunny
    Edgar Allan Poe's poetry


    Edgar Allen Posetry
    Quote by tangspot2
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