- 8 years 2 months ago
- Posts: 1986
The Date
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(Chapter 4)
Raw's jouney toaward's the castle is almost at a end but Raw cannot help but feel like he is being watched. Raw could have sworn he caught the glimpse
of a figure in the shadow's but when he turned to see what it was nothing was there. Raw decide's that he is just being paranoid and continues on his merry way.
After a few minute's Raw come's up to a large lake over the lake Raw can see the large castle. Raw look's for away to cross the lake but cannot see anyway to get across when all of a sudden Raw here's a noise behind him.
Raw spin's around and standing behind him a tall figure dressed in black. The figure has a blank look on his face and is breathing heavily , The figure advances on Raw slowly and Raw know's that the figure mean's him harm so he grab's Scaredscred and point's
her at the approaching figure.
(Raw----> "Stay back i know how to use this it's a powerful weapon of destruction"
Sacredscred begin's to sing.
(Sacredscred-----> "Somewhere over the rainbow
Way up high
There's a land that I heard of
Once in a lullaby
Somewhere over the rainbow
Skies are blue
And the dreams that you dare to dream
Really do come true
Some day I'll wish upon a star
And wake up where the clouds are far behind me
Where troubles melt like lemondrops
Away above the chimney tops
That's where you'll find me"
(Raw-----> "......."
(Raw-----> " I hate you sacredscred"
The Figure lunges toward's Raw who just manages to dodge out the way he swivel's around and Slashes the creature with Scaredscred. Which slice's all the way through the figure, A smile appears on Raw's face as he think's he has won but
the wound of the figure quickly heal's over until it look's like Raw never hit him. Raw shocked by what he had just seen tries to slash the figure again but the figure is fast and quickly avoids the strike and Punche's Raw sending him flying.
Raw is surprised that the figure has such amazing strength and tries again to slash the creature. But again it has no affect on the figure, Raw decide's that it would be best to try and escape and turn's tail like a coward and leg's it. But again he is no match for the speed of the figure who quickly catch's upto Raw.
Raw again tries to attack the figure but is beaten back, Fatigue start's to set in and Raw fall's to his knee's the figure walk's over to Raw and with a punch knock's him clean out. The watcher had completed it's task and pick's up Raw it move's over to the edge of the lake and let's out a primal scream. The water's of the lake begin to bubble and stir
then a large creature appear's out the water and move's it's head toward's the watcher. The watcher Step's onto the creature's head which then take's the watcher toward's the castle.
Raw awaken's with a pain in his head and find's that he cannot move his arm's or leg's because they have been chained to a wall. Raw notice's that he is in a cell he tries to struggle free but cannot free himself then he hear's the door of the cell open and a tall beautiful woman step's into cell. Raw cannot help but look the woman up and down as he notices her large breast's and curvy figure.
(SySFAN----> "Welcome to my castle"
(Raw-----> " Who are you? and what did i do to deserve this treatment"
The queen slap's Raw across the face.
(SYSFAN-----> "SILENCE FOOL"
(Raw--------> " I was only asking what i had done wrong)
The queen's face contort's with rage. Then all of a sudden she pull's Raw's pant's down to reveal his mighty 1 inch manhood.
(Raw----> "Erm why did you just pull my pant's down?)
(SYSFAN----> "I SAID SILENCE YOU WANKER!!!!!"
SYSFAN grab's Raw seven's nut's and give's a almighty twist. Raw scream's with such a high pitched squeal that it could have shattered glass.
(SYSFAN----> " NOW FOOL TELL ME WHY HAVE YOU COME TO THIS LAND"
(Raw in a smurf voice----> "I Dont know how i got here all i wanted was to get a rose and a gift for my date"
(SYSFAN-----> "YOU LIE!!!!"
SYSFAN pull's out a mallet and bring's them crashing down on Raw's sore nut's.
(Raw with a smurf voice that has just sucked a HELLIUM BALLOON!-----> " I SWEAR I SWEAR I DONT KNOW HOW I GOT HERE!!!"
(SYSFAN----> " I HAVE HAD ENOUGH OF YOUR LIE'S IT IS TIME FOR EXTREME MEASURES"
SYSFAN begins to chant a few strange word's then all of a sudden a picture of Foxxetrini appears in her hand's.
(Raw with a smurf voice that has just sucked a HELLIUM BALLOON!-----> "What are you planning to do?"
SYSFAN begin's to chant again and this time in her other hand a permanent Marker pen appears. Raw's heart fill's with fear.
(Raw with a smurf voice that has just sucked a HELLIUM BALLOON!-----> "YOU EVIL BITCH!!! YOU CANT BE THAT EVIL THAT CRUEL THAT HEARTLESS!!"
A wicked smile appear's on SYSFAN'S face she pull's the top off the marker pen and to Raw's horror draw's a mustach on the face of Foxxetrini.
(Raw voice returning to normal----> "YOU BITCH!!! YOU VILE BITCH!!! I WILL KILL YOU!!!!"
(SYSFAN----> "MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PREPARE HIM FOR THE SNIP"
One of SYSFAN'S guard's walk's up to Raw and pull's out a cigar cutter. He place's Raw's penis through the hole of the cutter and set's a timer for 2 minute's, then both queen SYSFAN and the guard leave Raw to his fate and leave the cell. Raw begin's to panic as he tries to struggle free. As time run's out Raw get's a idear he make's a mental picture of George bush naked which then causes his penis to shrink even more.
But then Raw's luck take's a turn for the worse he begin's to imagine Foxxentrini naked and his penis begin's to grow erect all the way to it's maximum size of 1 inch 5 cm's instead of it's normal 1 inch size. Raw begin's to sweat knowing that he is about to lose his only friend but then with one last go he imagine's George bush naked again and manage's just in the nick of time to avoid having his penis chopped off. Raw think's of Foxxetrini which give's him the
strength he needed to break free from his chain's. Raw find's that the cell door is unlocked and that there are no guard's around. As Raw is sneaking around looking for a way to escape the castle he hear's Sacredscred's voice from a different room. He peek's into the room and see's Scredscred being lowed down on a chain toward's a vat of acid. Even when the silly female sword is about to be destroyed she still sing's.
(sacredscred---->"Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Heroes in a half shell, turtle power
They're the worlds most fearsome fighting teens
[ we're really hip ] Teenage mutant ninja turtles
They're heroes in a half shell and they're green
[ hey, get a grip ] Teenage mutant ninja turtles
When the evil shredder attacks
These turtle boys don't cut him no slack
Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Splinter taught them to be ninja teens
[ he's a radical rat ] Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Leonardo leads, Donatello does machines
[ that's a fact, Jack ] Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Raphael is cool but rude (give me a break)
Michaelangelo is a party dude (cowabunga!)
Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Teenage mutant ninja turtles
Heroes in a half shell, turtle power"
Raw think's off away to save Sacredscred but decides he does not want to have that stupid singing sword with him anymore. So being a prick leave's sacredscred to melt in the acid.
(Raw---> " good riddance to bad rubbish"
Raw sneak's around the castle and find's a large room, inside the room Raw see's the phone booth that brought him here. The queen must have found it and brought it here he think's to himself. Raw rushes over to the booth and begin's to dial number's when all of a sudden queen SySFAN jump's inside the booth and tries to attack Raw. The booth begin's to crackle with electricity then it vanishes taking Raw seven and queen SYSFAN with it.
(to be continued)The Bucket is OpenedAre you sure you want to delete this post? Yes | No - 8 years 2 months ago
- Posts: 1986
SYSFan wrote:NE0RACERX wrote:damn queen i didn't even get to see your castle
Once you enter the scene, we can take the phone booth back to my castle!!!!!
erm the phone booth.....
oh you wont like the next chapter then lolThe Bucket is OpenedAre you sure you want to delete this post? Yes | No
.................but i'm not being pushy 
.......great story...... I wish I could have lived though.... stupid Raw!!! I will raise from the acid and claim my vengance!!!!!!!
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