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The Date
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(Chapter 5)
The booth transport's Raw and the evil Queen SYSFAN to a strange new place. They both Notice that this new world is animated , Raw then realises that he has been transported to a anime cartoon.
SYSFAN begin's to attack Raw again she does not care that she is in a new world she just want's to kill Raw for escaping her castle. The two battle a few minute's untill a large Roar is heard from behind them,
Both Raw and SYSFAN turn to see what it is that is behind them.
(SYSFAN-----> "WHAT.....WHAT IS THAT THING?"
A large animated creature lunge's at queen SYSFAN and ignore's Raw. The creature grow's tentacle's and begin's to tear off the queen's garment's, Then Raw realises where he is....
(Raw----> " Oh my god we are in a HENTAI cartoon"
The scream's of SYSFAN do not stop the creature from probing her body with it's slimey tentacle's it then wrap's a tentacle around each breast and then enter's her.
(HENTAI TENATCLE RAPE SCENE TAKE'S PLACE)
Raw watches in horror as he witnesses the violation of SYSFAN. Raw decides to let the demon monster have it's way with SYSFAN and get's back inside the Phone booth.
He begins to dial random number's and before he pushe's the last button he take's one last glance at SySFAN moaning and groaning and begging for the creature to stop. A smile come's across Raw's face as he look's at the scene taking place.
(Raw----> "That will teach you bitch to mess with me and smash my nut's"
He pushes the last button and the phone booth take's him far away from the hentai cartoon and SYSFAN'S violation.
(Meanwhile)
Foxxentrini arrives at the resturant that Raw seven is supposed to meet her. She sit's herself down at a table and decides while she is waiting she will order something to eat and drink. She see's a waiter heading toward's her.
(waiter----> "Good eveing ma'am how are you and how may i be able to help you"
(Foxy----> "Hmm there is alot to choose from could you possible suggest something"
(Waiter---> "Well how about a nice bottle of champagen (cough) (cough) which (cough) i can pour all (cough) over your perky (cough) (cough) Breast's (cough) and lick(cough) off".)
(foxy---> "sorry i did not make that out"
(Waiter---> "Oh i was just saying you should try our champagne"
(Foxy ----> "But what could i have to eat"
(Waiter---> "Well you could try(cough getting cough naked cough and making cough love cough to cough me cough or you could cough just show cough me cough your tit's cough cough"
(foxy-----> "Sorry did you just say something about tit's!!!???"
(Waiter---> "No not at all ma'am i said try our lobster but becareful of some of the other waiter's they like to have big tip's"
(Foxy---> "Oh sorry my mistake"
(Waiter----> "No need to appologize i would say tho that you have beautiful eye's and a charming smile that brighten's up my day."
Foxy does not realise that the waiter has a foot camera on and is filming under her dress.
(Foxy----> "You want to know something your very sweet did you know that"
(Waiter----> "No ma'am you are the sweet one just looking at you makes my life have meaning, allow me to introduce myself i am kray"
(Foxy----> "Hello kray i am foxxetrini i was supposed to be meetingmy date here but it look's like he has stood me up"
(Kray----> " The swine if he was here right now i would fight for your honour"
(Foxy-----> " He he Your so sweet and a little hottie too"
(meanwhile)
The phone booth arrives at it's new destination and Raw step's out. He survey's his surrounding's and notice's televison screen's floating around in the air. He spot's a door standing by it's self so he decide's to investigate it,
Raw open's the door which reveal's a large room with thousand's of televeision screen's and in the middle of the room is a man in a leather chair.
(Man---> "Hello Raw please come in"
Raw enter's the room and walk's over toward's the man. Another leather chair appear's out of nowhere next to Raw.
(Man---> "Please enter Raw Seven"
(Raw----> " How do you know my name?"
(Man----> "All will be revealed once you come in and take a seat"
Raw stand's in the door way and does not budge.
(Man---> " Just come the f**k in you stupid pillock and have a seat your letting a draft in"
(Raw---> "Oh sorry"
Raw walk's inside and take's a seat infront of the man. The man turn's to face Raw.
(Man----> "I AM THE BEING"
(Raw----> "Hmmm you look like Ninja Monkey to me"
(The being----> " WHAT!? SHHH!!!"
The being slap's Raw.
(Raw---> "OW!"
(The being----> "ANYWAY!! I know all about your trouble's and your date with Foxxetrini and i can help you"
(Raw----> "You can? how?"
(The being----> "I can send you back home but on one condition"
(Raw----> "anything just tell me please what it is i have to do?"
(The being----> "You have to forget about your date with Foxxetrini"
(Raw---> "what? why?"
(The being----> " Because i bloody said so that's why"
(Raw----> "NO NEVER I HAVE NOT GONE THROUGH ALL THIS JUST TO GIVE UP NOW!!!"
(The being-----> "Then i have no choice but to do this"
The being reaches into his pocket and pull's out a remote control, He then pushes a button which open's a portal. Raw's face fill's with fear as he gaze's upon the creature that is
stepping out of the portal. Raw instantly remember's the creature stepping out of the portal,the creature know as the watcher. Raw begins to wish that he never left Sacredscred to melt in the acid,He also wishes that all this was a dream
but it is not a dream and the watcher lunges at Raw....But all of a sudden a bright flas appear's and a Taxi cab smash's through the door. A man's pop's his head out the window of the Taxi.
(Taxi driver-----> "Quick get inside i am here to save you!"
Raw not having to be told twice run's over to the Taxi and jump's inside. The Taxi speed's off and withthe same power as the phone booth teleport's away from the being's strange realm. Raw is amazed at the inside of the taxi it look's 10 bigger on the inside than it does
on th outside.
(Taxi driver----> "Hi my name is Neoracerx but my friend's call me Neo"
(Raw----> "Erm hi thank you for saving me back there"
(Neo----> "No problem, i was told by the wise man to help you get to your date with Foxetrini"
(Raw----> "why?"
(Neo----> "I dont know all i know is that the future of the universe depend's on you going on a date with Foxxetrini"
(Raw----> "Huh?"
(Neo---> "Just dont ask"
All of a sudden the Taxi begin's to rock violently and banging can be heard from the outside of the Taxi. Raw look's outside the window to see the Watcher has managed to cling onto the taxi and is trying to kill them.
(Neo----> "Ok here's the plan we are about to arrive at your destination, i will fight this thing and you go and have your date with Foxxetrini do you understand?"
(Raw---> " YES I DO. NOTHING WILL STOP ME FROM HAVING MY DATE!"
The Taxi materializes at the resturant and Raw seven leap's out and rushes inside. Neo leap's out the Taxi and prepare's to battle the watcher. The watcher raises his hand a glowing sword appear's.
(Neo-----> "That's impessive but i can do the same"
Neo raises his hand and a sword appear's.The two of them glare at each other for a moment then lunge at each other and begin to battle. The sound of metal against metal can be heard and people gather to to watch the fight. Neo begin's to do some matrix effect fighting but the watcher
is able to predict his every move and block the attack's, the watcher then goes on the offensive with fast and deadly attack's, Neo also easily predict's the attack's and counters. Both neo and the watcher seem to be at a stale mate none of them being able to get the better of the other one.
But then the watcher speak's to Neo....
(Watcher-----> "Neo i a proud that you have grown so strong."
(Neo---> "How do you know my name?"
(Watcher----> "Look closer do you now see who i am......i am collin farrell.....your FATHER!!"
(Neo-----> "NO THATS A LIE....YOU CANT BE.....NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"
(Collin farrell----> "Yes i am your father so join with me join the dark side"
(Neo-----> "No never i will never join the darkside"
Neo lunges at his father full of rage but that is what his father wanted and he knock's the sword from Neo's hand. And then slams neo onto the ground.
(Collin Farrell---> "It is a shame that you wont join me. I guess this mean's i have to kill you."
Neo's farther Raises his sword into the air to bring down on to the helpless Neo. But neo using that moment uses his mind power's to call his sword back to him just in time for him to plunge it deep into his farther's heart.
Neo's farther stumbles back and collapses on the floor. If it was a normal sword then he could have healed himself but beacuse it was his son's sword he was unable to use his healing factor.
(Collin Farrell-----> "You may have deafeated me but remember this....You will grow up to become like me. It is in your blood you will become a crazy stalker like me MUWHAHAHAHA HA HA HA......"
Then collin Farrell die's leaving Neo confused. All he could keep saying to himself was...
(Neo-----> "My father is the man.....he is the man....."
(Meanwhile inside the resturant)
Raw looks for foxxetrini with a big smile on his face he had finally reached his destination and was going to meet the girl of his dream's. All raw could think about is what he had to overcome to get here and that now it had fianlly paid off, Raw search's and search's but cannot find Foxxetrini.
Then he decides to ask a member of staff if they had seen her, He describe' her too each member of staff untill one member of staff tell's Raw that they had seen her going into the basement where the Washing machine's for the uniform's were. Raw with delight Rushes down towards the basement ignoring all the
staff only sign's and quickly get's to the door leading to the washing machine's when all of a sudden he hear's something. Raw pushes his ear to the door and hear's a woman moaning with pleasure,Fear rushes into Raw's heart as he peek's round the door to see who it is.
Raw spot's a couple having sex , He spot's a beautiful girl sat on top a washing machine with a waiter making hot and passionate love to her. The girl was Foxxetrini....
(Foxxetrini---> "Oh Kray that is wonderful oh yes yes yes yes yes YESSSS!!!"
Raw's heart break's into a thousand bit's,Tear's begin to form in his eye's as he tries to battle with his feeling's. The woman he loved the girl of his dream's was having intercourse with a waiter called kray.
Raw's tear's get the best of him and he begin's to cry. Not being able to cope with what he just saw he rushes all the way back to the entrance of the resturant.
Neo spot's Raw in a pitiful state and try's to get him to talk but then he turn's his attention to the sky as dark cloud's begin to form in the sky. The earth begin's to shake and fire begin's to fall from the sky. Neo knew what was happening , RaW seven had failed and now the universe was coming to a end.
It was over they had lost and Raw was still going to remain a virgin who would have thought it would have come to this.......Neo look's up as a great ball of fire come's hurtling down toward's him and the still crying like a big girl's blouse Raw seven. Neo closes his eye's ready to die when..........
Raw wake's up.......
(Narrator)
Raw seven a man with a mission.
A mission to kiss a girl.
But this girl is not just any girl.
This is the girl of his dreams.
The girl's name Foxxetrini.
But for Raw seven for failing his mission.
Can only recieve one reward and that is to be trapped in a time loop.
A TIME LOOP IN...........................
...........THE CHAOSZERG ZONE............
(Creepy ending music play's)
Ok that was it i am sorry if it turned out crap i was suffering from writer's block lol.
oh and sorry for any mistake's that you find.The Bucket is OpenedAre you sure you want to delete this post? Yes | No - Deleted
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chaoszerg wrote:SYSFan wrote:Dude, that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah im glad you did not mind being tentacle raped lol
Wasn't my favorite moment, but it got me away from Raw.........although torturing him was fun!!!!!!!!Are you sure you want to delete this post? Yes | No
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