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    • 3 years 3 months ago
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    I'm an Edgar Allan poe fan, and a Halloween fan.

    This year thought Id honor poe with a poe style poem that took me a while and several drafts to compose.

    Be burtal. Poe would :p

    [CENTER]I’ve enraged traumatic furry, Deaths dark dead hand, is now my jury,
    With many restraints, in various numbers, He even chained me to the floor!
    As I ranted, nearly raving, my blood runs cold, Deaths death hand raising!!

    Charged with crimes and sins, that could chill you, to the very core.
    screams and cries for justice echo, in every hallway, on every floor.
    Crystal clearly I remember, I blazed that place to coals and ember!!

    Each separate flying Sparkle, shining ,like endless flames on a brilliant firey shore.
    I think , sometimes I do feel sorrow!, It's true!!!, If only, I could borrow,,,,,, time....
    Deaths dark dead hand does claim,,,,, another more...[/CENTER]
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      • 3 years 1 month ago
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      Very nicely written! Loved it!
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        • 3 years 1 month ago
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        May want to change the spelling of fury. It's making me think of poorly drawn anthropomorphic beasts beating on you.
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          • 3 years 1 month ago
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          You may want to capitalize "Poe" too.
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            • 3 years 1 month ago
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            and burtal
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              • 3 years 1 month ago
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              AND replace the commas with periods in the fourth paragraph.


              Just teasing. I read some of Edgar Allan Poe's poetry a couple weeks ago, so I got to say yours is pretty good! Do continue writing!
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                • 3 years 1 month ago
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                Quote by RetroxBunny
                Edgar Allan Poe's poetry


                Edgar Allen Posetry
                Quote by tangspot2
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