• shadowprophet
    • 3 months 10 days ago
    • Posts: 236
    		 I'm an Edgar Allan poe fan, and a Halloween fan.

    This year thought Id honor poe with a poe style poem that took me a while and several drafts to compose.

    Be burtal. Poe would :p

    I’ve enraged traumatic furry, Deaths dark dead hand, is now my jury,
    With many restraints, in various numbers, He even chained me to the floor!
    As I ranted, nearly raving, my blood runs cold, Deaths death hand raising!!

    Charged with crimes and sins, that could chill you, to the very core.
    screams and cries for justice echo, in every hallway, on every floor.
    Crystal clearly I remember, I blazed that place to coals and ember!!

    Each separate flying Sparkle, shining ,like endless flames on a brilliant firey shore.
    I think , sometimes I do feel sorrow!, It's true!!!, If only, I could borrow,,,,,, time....
    Deaths dark dead hand does claim,,,,, another more...
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    • ruthkeith
      • 1 month 3 days ago
      • Posts: 5
      		 Very nicely written! Loved it!
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      • Ghost of Vapor
        • 1 month 3 days ago
        • Posts: 359
        		 May want to change the spelling of fury. It's making me think of poorly drawn anthropomorphic beasts beating on you.
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        • thecrow174
          • 1 month 1 hour ago
          • Posts: 9803
          		 You may want to capitalize "Poe" too.
          There is a battle between two wolves inside us all.

          One is evil and the other one is good. Which wolf will win? The one you feed the most.

          http://unbelievableyou.com/a-native-american-cherokee-story-two-wolves/
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          • stake n sheak
            • 28 days 3 hours ago
            • Posts: 1769
            		 and burtal
            tangspot2 wrote:
            Mrs. stake you say some nasty on my threads. Dirty bitch
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            • RetroxBunny
              • 23 days 18 hours ago
              • Posts: 1989
              		 AND replace the commas with periods in the fourth paragraph.


              Just teasing. I read some of Edgar Allan Poe's poetry a couple weeks ago, so I got to say yours is pretty good! Do continue writing!
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              • stake n sheak
                • 23 days 6 hours ago
                • Posts: 1769
                RetroxBunny wrote:
                Edgar Allan Poe's poetry


                Edgar Allen Posetry
                tangspot2 wrote:
                Mrs. stake you say some nasty on my threads. Dirty bitch
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