Rick Ace Rhodes wrote:
Since I'm new and published an article about a month ago (you can see it if you click on More at the article section), what did everyone think of mine?
I don't think it was very well written. Some sentences have weak construction. There are a lot of run-on sentences that are somewhat difficult to read.
You wrote many times that you forgot something, or that you don't know suchandsuch...presenting yourself as far from an authority, so why are you writing? I think articles should be either authoritative or personal. For the former, find out those things that you don't know. For the latter, talk about your own experiences with the topic.
Or unique. Straight information and reviews has been done so many times, I don't like to read that any more.
I did find some grammar mistakes. 1. I will not "bare with you"; that's something I only do with pretty women. Please bear this in mind. 2. "It's" means "it is", not that it possesses the object. 3. "Preceded" means the object came before. "Proceeded" is the word you want, which means "moved forward."
Other than those uses of incorrect words, your article was actually very good as far as spelling goes. I also appreciate that you centered your images.