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    • 5 years 25 days ago
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    So, I'm doing an article on things that scared me the most as a kid (seeing 9/11 footage on TV when it actually happened and other disasters, the killer vacuum from that episode of Tales from the Darkside, the well in the woods nearby my house and the stories surrounding it, and the thought that everyone would die someday). I decided to write one out as a test, and so I want you guys to make your judgements.

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      • 5 years 25 days ago
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      I love how you rank that stupid fear from your childhood as #1. I'll laugh at how low 9/11 is on your list, relative to everything else.

      Seriously, who the hell cares about shit you were scared of as a child? Why not write an article that more people can relate to? "The well in the woods nearby my house," seriously?
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        • 5 years 25 days ago
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        Sounds fun. My only suggestion would be to keep it light hearted and perhaps remove 9/11 from your article. 2001 isn't retro yet
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          • 5 years 25 days ago
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          I don't think you can tell him what's retro for him and what's not, plus keep in mind he was born in 1994. The only flaw in this article is the concept of the article itself.
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            • 5 years 5 days ago
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            Great start!

            My only suggestion is to make that Tom Swift and his Sky Racer pic the same height as the other two pics next to it. Best way is to resize with it with Photoshop or maybe Paint.

            Good luck!
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