• SilverSpeedy
    • 6 years 5 months ago
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    		 Okay, so my friend and I have decided to make a slasher genre comic together called "Donna R".

    Basicly the story is Allison Robertson of The Donnas is your regular talented guitar player, but when the night comes she smells the blood of guitar posers and goes out to track them down, get into battle with them and kill them, turning into serial killer "Donna R", saving the guitar world from fakes along with her 2 foot tall robot sidekick Lamaar.

    Anyways, my friend does the writing and I do the artwork and before we do more I've been looking for opinions on the artwork I do for it, so here's what I've done so far and I'd like to know what you think of them:

    "Donna R" logo
    Cover for first comic
    Allison Robertson/Donna R
    (possible) Lamaar (Yes he IS supposed to have long green string hair, no matter how much of a "stonerbot" it makes him look like)
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    • Maklu IV
      • 6 years 5 months ago
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      		 Is it safe to assume that this is going to be a web comic? Also, if you're going for a comical, cutesy look (and I hope the writing is the same), then you've nailed it.


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      • NickRules
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        		 Well I like the story idea! I hope you can take criticism, the drawing looks kinda bad :oops: like its really obvious that it was done in Mspaint, not sure if thats the look your going for. It all looks like it was done by a kindergartner, no offense, its a really good idea though.
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        • RetroRickster923
          • 6 years 5 months ago
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          		 Awesome story...but I hate drawing comics. :roll:
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          • Stickykeys09
            • 6 years 5 months ago
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            		 So I'm assuming this is a parody on the band 'The Donnas'?
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            • SilverSpeedy
              • 6 years 5 months ago
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              Stickykeys09 wrote:
              So I'm assuming this is a parody on the band 'The Donnas'?


              Well kind of, it's just focused on the guitarist Allison Robertson, though my friend and I are thinking of maybe giving the other members a few cameo appearances every now and then


              By the way, tonight is Allison's radio show on Women Rock Radio and she comes in chat often, I will (and possibly my friend if she shows up) be telling Allison everything tonight and get her opinion on it. I'll post the pics from the chat on here tommorow of what she thinks
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              • SilverSpeedy
                • 6 years 5 months ago
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                		 ok, sorry for double post, but this is what we got
                http://i31.tinypic.com/11a8qxd.png
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