• videos4ever
    • 6 years 7 months ago
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    		 Yeah, I'm writing it at the moment, it's about a man who fakes hs own death, because he owes money to a loan shark, when the government discover he's still alive, they get a hierd asassin who turns out to be the loan shark to kill the man...
    Tell me what ya think!
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    • theguy73
      • 6 years 7 months ago
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      		 Sounds like a funny movie to me.
      When life gives you lemons look for someone whose life gave them vodka and have a party
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      • HarryReems
        • 6 years 7 months ago
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        		 All it needs is techno music.
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        • MtLaStella
          • 6 years 7 months ago
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          		 Sounds interesting, though why is the government putting a hit out on him in the first place?
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          • MtLaStella
            • 6 years 7 months ago
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            		 P.S. - My dad, Charlie Stella, writes about loansharks and other mafia activity. You should read his books, it'll help with your writing.

            http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_ss_gw/104-5013345-4195137?url=search-alias%3Daps&field-keywords=charlie+stella&x=19&y=14
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            • videos4ever
              • 6 years 7 months ago
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              MtLaStella wrote:
              Sounds interesting, though why is the government putting a hit out on him in the first place?

              Because he owns money to a loan shark for 12 years!
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              • MtLaStella
                • 6 years 7 months ago
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                		 Oh I see, so he's a loanshark to the government. I thought the government hired an assasin to kill him for some unknown reason and, coincidentally, he wound up being the loanshark.
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                • videos4ever
                  • 6 years 7 months ago
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                  		 That's it!
                  Once I finish the script, I plan to make a novel of it!
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