• 7 years 9 months ago
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    And I'm ok with that. It was my first one. But I have a question. Why?

    http://www.retrojunk.com/details_articles/1396/

    Constructive criticism much appreciated.
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      • 7 years 9 months ago
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      not too bad, i did like the pogs and legend of the hidden temple pics
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        • 7 years 9 months ago
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        The spelling and such is good but I just couldn't relate to the article since I was a teenager in the 90s.

        People usually get on me for hating the 90s (and there are some people on here who did, not going to call you out though.)
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          • 7 years 9 months ago
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          didn't hate it, i didnt relate to it as much as i would have liked, probably due to it being very american but it still brought back glorius memories of my childhood here in sunny england.

          pop tarts (chocolate FTW), i had completley forgotten about pogs, doug, and enjoying rubbish music (i knew all the words to the spice girls first two albums). also reminded me of the countless sticker books i collected, from premier league, to video games and movies, like pogs, crazy bones, and anything you bought in a pack from the newsagents, i had to have it,
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            • 7 years 9 months ago
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            Like I stated before, the article was just too rushed. It's as if you had a deadline or something. This wasn't a school paper that you hand off just to get by. This was something that everyone who comes here was going to read. That being said, you should have put a little more heart and time into it. And for the record, the article wasn't terrible.

            I know how young you are so I hope this doesn't read negatively. I have nieces and nephews your age and I am not in the habit of treating kids like crap. I am only offering my opinion.
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              • 7 years 9 months ago
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              no, ducktalesfan hated it because he grew up in the 80s, and it's fairly natural to say that the decade you grew up in is the best.

              And the only loser I see in this thread is you.

              You buddy, need to get banned.
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                • 7 years 9 months ago
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                Liked the article, But I just don't relate 2 it....

                Good job tho, I'm sure those who Grew up in the Mid/late 90'z will like it a Lot....
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