• System
    • 7 years 11 months ago
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    		 Hey everyone, my first article was just published.

    Aside from the shameless self-promotion, I'm looking for feedback.

    I have, what I think, are some good original topics. I want to perfect my article skills though. Literary skills should be fine, I'm an English student in my last year of University...:)

    More pics, more history?

    I tried not to include my life's story, and to not just show pics.
    I tried to give some interesting info that could relate to other media people might know, like the Art Spiegelman reference.

    Anyways, any suggestions would be much appreciated!

    Thanks!

    http://www.retrojunk.com/details_articles/1203/
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    • eep!
      • 7 years 11 months ago
      • Posts: 735
      mondo_tdot wrote:
      Hey everyone, my first article was just published.

      Aside from the shameless self-promotion, I'm looking for feedback.

      I have, what I think, are some good original topics. I want to perfect my article skills though. Literary skills should be fine, I'm an English student in my last year of University...:)

      More pics, more history?

      I tried not to include my life's story, and to not just show pics.
      I tried to give some interesting info that could relate to other media people might know, like the Art Spiegelman reference.

      Anyways, any suggestions would be much appreciated!

      Thanks!

      http://www.retrojunk.com/details_articles/1203/

      it was good! but it also could have been longer. i still have some wacky packages.
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      • System
        • 7 years 11 months ago
        • Posts: 74809
        		 I just submitted my second...

        I think you'll enjoy.

        This picture should explain what I wrote about:

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