My Superheroes Pt. 1

This is a collection of the superheros I created back in the day.

I started a notebook full of superheroes and their villains that I thought would be fun to see, and some variations of some already created. I wound up making 2 volumes worth of notebooks, but I'll highlight them here with a few articles. I was a kid, was impressionable, and was imaginative. A lot of the stuff I drew was almost an exact copy of another hero/character. Like I said, I was a kid, so sue me!



The Brak Family:

This was something I put together during my Cartoon Planet stage. Here's the gang's first album.

I LOVED that show and decided to bring in some new characters in Brak's immediate family in the form of a show. The premise of the show was Brak's interactions with his crazy family, while dealing with his friends Space Ghost, Zorak, and Moltar. Of course, this was before "The Brak Show" came out. You can tell I knew how to draw Brak pretty well haha. There's Baby Tak, Brother Mak, Sister Frak, and Granny (spelt "Grany" in pic) Nak. Luckily, I left out Dad, who turned out human in the Adult Swim show.




Fantastic Flock:

from left to right: 'Who?', 'Hawk Master'

from left to right: 'White Dove', 'Woodpecker'

This is a cheap rip-off of The Fantastic Four and Gatchaman (G-Force).

I got the idea in the car one day when I was in 3rd grade. I thought, "Why aren't they just called The Fantastic Flock? It sounds cooler." The first guy is 'Who?'. Obviously a play on what owls say. He was the oldest and followed second command behind Hawk Master. This guy was the second oldest, but was the leader of the group. Stirred emotions were a result of the age difference. White Dove is the mother-like individual in the group. This is not to be confused with DC's hero, Dove.

Dove is on the left

Now, not to make a ruckus on the website, and I'm mentioning again that I was only in the 3rd grade; I named the youngest member of the team after a colloquial term for a man's reproductive organ. I drew this team, and with pride, showed my brother what I created. He busted out with laughter and told me that I named the last member after a man's... um.. member. I quickly added the word 'Wood' in front of his name, and he became Woodpecker. I learned something that day... thank you, brother.


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Okay, the rest of these guys follow in this layout. On the left side is the hero (the good guy), and on the right side is the villain (bad guy to the good guy).


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Give Up & Eye Master:

from left to right: 'Give Up', 'Eye Master'

Give Up is a LETHAL robot with the ability to scare the piss out of any evil-doer. Look at him! That scary crossbow can tear throw any armor. He has a flame thrower/ gun. That laser can burn holes like a mother-effer. He's a robot with awesome sword skills. And he's definitely not vulnerable to any nudges with that single wheel and his high center of gravity. He's the ultimate crime fighter.... I kid. Nonetheless, he has to stop the monstrous Eye Master. This guy can focus on anything in front of him with a telescopic eye. His only limitation is the curvature of the earth's surface (the horizon). Steroids pump into his eye socket from a canister strapped to his back. I added the feature of a morphable hand that is pictured in the drawing as a hammer. Oh yeah, he is in no way related to the eye glass retailer EyeMasters.




Bobcat & Tooth Face:

from left to right: 'Bobcat', 'Tooth Face'

Bobcat is in many ways similar to Wolverine, besides the fact he is nicer (look at that smile). He has impenetrable claws and stripes on his uniform. He takes on the abilities of felines. He is agile, smells danger, and has an unquenchable taste for milk. His villain is Tooth Face. Is there any more to say about this bad guy other than the fact his name sounds like Two Face.

When I was little, I swore Two Face's name was Tooth Face. I grew up, and decided to bring this villain to life. I guess he's a dentist by day and a bank robber by night.



Speeder & Black Tornado:

from left to right: 'Speeder', 'Black Tornado'

Ever since I started collecting comic books, Daredevil has been my favorite hero. As I got deeper into the comic realm I found a hero by the name of Quicksilver. I loved this character. He was a bad guy at first working under his father, Magneto, who then turned good and joined The Avengers. I loved his power and look, so I decided to make a Quicksilver of my own. Speeder encompasses the same aspects as Quicksilver, except he has a mask (like the Quicksilver/Impulse hybrid 'Mercury' from the Amalgam crossover).

His villain is Black Tornado, a rip-off of Red Tornado in the DC Universe.

In fact, I was just looking at a picture of Red Tornado in an issue of Wizard magazine while I drew this character. I just added a Mysterio-like bubble to make him look menacing. These two would duke it out heavily, only to end with Speeder neutralizing the tornado made by BT by running in the counter-direction of the twister's rotation.



Mega Watt/Battery Man & Negative/Positive:

clockwise: 'Mega Watt', 'Negative', 'Positive', 'Battery Man'

Mega Watt is a character looking awfully familiar to Batman's villain Mr. Freeze.

He runs on the energy source of Battery Man. Once an ordinary battery, turned supercharged from a freak lightning strike while inside a Game Boy. The Game Boy was being played by a boy playing his favorite game, The Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening.

Through the lightning strike, the battery gained Link's heroics and personality, and searched for an ally to fight for justice: enter Mega Watt. The combination of Mega Watt and Battery Man bring an electrical force unseen before, but is evenly matched with the power of Positive and Negative (spelt as "Negitive" in the pic). These two are floating symbols with conflicting attitudes. Negative is the pessimistic one while Positive is the optimistic one. Notice that I had no idea which sign went with each word.



Streetch & The Hippie:

from left to right: 'The Hippie', 'Streetch'

I drew this in middle school. I originally wanted to make The Hippie the good guy, but I wound up liking the modern influenced Streetch. Streetch drips coolness, unlike Saved By the Bell's Screech.

Streetch is a DJ by day (or is that at night). In other words, when he's not fighting crime, he spins those plates. His name derives from the fact that he has street smarts and has the ability to stretch. The Hippie is just basically a guy whacked out from drugs. He and Streetch banter and fight about their differences, ultimately leading to The Hippie's placement in jail with possession charges.



The Legion of Legends & The General:

clockwise: 'Seeker', 'Apparition Lad', 'Water Lass', 'Invisible Gal'

clockwise: 'Print', 'Quicker', 'Floatism', 'Redline'

clockwise: 'Atom Crusher', 'Flare', 'Giant Girl', 'Telegirl'

clockwise: 'Electrikid', 'The General', 'Zoo'

The Legion of Legends functions much like The Legion of Super-Heroes. They're both composed of adolescent heroes and fight the perils of the universe.

The leader of the group is trusted with the Legion Belt which harbors the ability to jump through time. This helps the Legion-ites (haha) travel across time to write the wrongs. Seeker is the current leader. He has the ability to foresee the future, which helps with unnecessary leaps into the future. I drew these guys very simple at first, but redrew them later on in detail. The General is the Legion's biggest adversary. He killed their last leader and wears the Legion Belt he stole from the fallen leader upside down in spite of the group. The other members include and their "inspirations:

Invisible Gal - she turns invisible!

AKA: Invisible Woman


Apparition (spelt "Aparition" in pic) Lad - he becomes transparent, but still visible (much like Kitty Pryde).


Water Lass - manipulates water and shoots it out of her hands.

Like Aspen from Fathom, but with short hair


Print - the tomboy girl of the group. She can duplicate herself in any amounts.

Multiple Man


Redline - he uses a plasma-like staff in hand to hand combat. I guess it's like a lightsaber.

Darth Maul


Quicker - the speedster of the group. I tried giving him a 'fro at first. I thought it would be funny to see a guy running at super sonic speed with a huge afro.

The Answer?


Floatism - she floats.

Chris Angel?


Atom Crusher - he's the alien of the group. Can shrink to atomic scale.

Atom Smasher


Wears those weird Oakley glasses that wrap around the head.


Telegirl (spelt Telligirl in pic) - she has telekinetic powers.

Marvel Girl


Flare - fire manipulator.

The Human Torch


Giant Girl - she's the goth of the group. She grows, duh.

Marvel's Giant-Girl


Electrikid - electricity manipulator.

Electro


Zoo - she talks to and controls animals.

Sort of like Animal Man




Toiloet Man & H-E-F-B-S-S Man:

My brother stole my notebook one day and added a few of his own superheroes. His first creation is Toilet Man, complete with a plunger and toilet scrubber. His second was Hawk-Eagle-Falcon-Bat-Super-Soaker Man, a farce on a combination of characters. He didn't draw the guy, but left his shield as a reminder. Today, I get the feeling he was making fun of my characters.


Conclusion:
Thanks for reading. I hope you find these guys funny and entertaining. Feel free to share your own heroes you made. I'll make another one of these soon with more ACTION-PACKED creations. Laters.





































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    zinny50 Posted 3 years 4 months ago
    This article wasn't so bad? it was well written and had alot of personal info. Keep up the good work man im a big fan.
    Cosgrove Posted 4 years 2 months ago
    This article makes me laugh, now. It's scored with a '4', but my other articles are all 28+. hahaha. I tend on doing another one soon, but probably more relatable.

    AGB: Thanks, man.

    echeetah: Thanks, bud. I was hoping to get the same reaction from everyone that you had. I wanted to make people remember their heroes.

    pbot: Your guys sound cool. X-Men's always a great source to copy from. I know I did it! I thought some people would enjoy the Hippie remark. Thanks!

    princessoftheppls: Thanks for the comment. IDK if you would want to stalk me. I was a kid when I drew this stuff. You've just fallen in love with my former self :D hahaha Pedophile ;)
    Deleted Posted 4 years 2 months ago
    "Give Up is a LETHAL robot with the ability to scare the piss out of any evil-doer. Look at him! That scary crossbow can tear throw any armor. He has a flame thrower/ gun. That laser can burn holes like a mother-effer. He's a robot with awesome sword skills. And he's definitely not vulnerable to any nudges with that single wheel and his high center of gravity. He's the ultimate crime fighter (IRONIC HOW HIS NAME IS GIVE UP).... I kid (LOL XD)." ^
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    Wow, I liked the superheroes. Alot. *stares at you with blank expression* Now Im gonna stalk you. Just jk. It was good man, for a little kid.
    pbot Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Dude this article was super cool. I used to do the exact thing as well, but I went a few steps farther, I actually also started to draw comics with my characters. Most of my characters were based on the X-Men and very briefly Star Wars.

    By the way, I thought the hippie character is both awesome and hilarious, because a hippie really isn't the kind of person who fights, so I guess the most you can get them on is a drug possession charge.

    Really really enjoyed reading this article, maybe I'll upload my own characters that I drew.
    echeetah Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    I'll bump this article up one. This made me look back fondly on all the superheroes I created as a kid. And no Cos, don't let the score matter to you. If you want to make a part 2, do so. I'll read it and probably enjoy it.
    AGB Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    That was great. Had alot of fun reading it.
    Cosgrove Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Should I be this worried over my rating? Should I stop this series on part 1?
    Cosgrove Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Edit: I remember! Willy could turn into a clock. I know, not exciting. You got a tongue, a worm, and a clock. Not much you can do there lol
    Cosgrove Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Gemini Guy,
    haha Venom does look like a walking Venus fly trap with his teeth! Venom was an awesome guy to build a character around.

    Gandolfdude11,
    "a homicidal ball of fluff with and eyepatch called Fuzz Boy." If that's not a hook for a series, I don't know what is!

    Dal,
    I know EXACTLY what you mean. I designed guy Powerpuff Girls called the Powerpunch Guys. They would fight alongside the girls in battle. Soon after, the RowdyRuff Boys were introduced and fought against the girls. Looking back I can see where that is a little sexist pitting guys against girls like that. But I digress. My favorite villian was the he/she thing called Him.

    I also created a spoof off of Ed, Edd, and Eddy. The show itself had not come out, but cartoon Network put out commercials about it premiering soon. I took out my drawing pad and drew Wil, Will, and Willy. Unlike the Eds, the Wils could morph into different things. I remember one was a tongue, the other was a worm, and I don't remember what the other Wil could morph into.
    Riphard Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    awesome. you had me a toothface. hahaha!

    keep up the good work.
    dalmatianlover Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    You were pretty creative. Reading your Brak portion reminded me of some childhood times. There were times when I made up stuff in my head based on franchises I loved as a kid, but then all of a sudden, they became realities and were completely butchered from what I imagined! Don't you hate it when that happens?
    Cosgrove Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Thanks for the comments guys. They're much more helpful than the people who are just docking points off of my article and not taking the time to tell me how to improve it for future installments. I guess people just don't like either:

    a] superheroes
    b] kid drawings
    c] lots of pictures
    d] relatable materials (Brak, Gatchaman, Batman, Zelda, Screech, etc.)

    I tried making it fun and hoped I wasn't the only one who did this (obviously not). I always try to write something different, but failed epically on this one. I'll just make another mind numbing SNES article next time, jk.

    Please give me some feedback. I'm a man.... I can take it, guys. In the meantime, I'm heading to the mud baths, wanna come?
    Gemini Guy Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Interesting ideas, though I must admit the fantastic flock intrigues me the most.

    I made a superhero myself back in the day known as Power Plant who was a cross between Venom from Spider-man and a giant venus flytrap and then I created his arch-nemesis Nightshade, who was a mix of Venom and Poison Ivy and kind of looked like the bad guy from the movie "Star Kid"
    Ganondorfdude11 Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    This reminds me of comics I used to draw in 5th grade. Only one of them was a real superhero, "Super Bobby." It was more of a "wacky hijinx" type of comic, with a mad scientist with a bad eye tic, a cowardly alien whose superpower is being cowardly (he involuntarily shot mind-beams whenever he was freaked out), a homicidal ball of fluff with and eyepatch called Fuzz Boy, and a main character who dressed in a purple jumpsuit and whose only power was weilding a huge gun, named Bob. He had an evil clone named "Bazooka Bob" who had a gun for an arm. Maybe I can dig out some of my old notebooks and write an article about those comics I used to draw.
    Great article. A nice insight into childhood imagination.
    BarthBurger Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Thanks for sharing. That brought back memories of my own comics and characters. Takes guts to put yourself out there. Nice job.
    tbondrage99 Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    A fine article. Who hasn't created there own superheroes, lord knows I have.
    Cosgrove Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Criticisms to make it a more entertaining article to read?
    Cosgrove Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Thanks Hoju! Man, after all of these heroes I created, I only made one tangible comic book. He was Stick Guy (part Superman, part stick figure) and he was the easiest to draw :)

    I had a guy like The Bumbling Bee. He was called The Gnat and fought a rich old man named Greed who swatted at him with a fly-swatter. Funny how kids can think some of the same things.
    Hoju Koolander Posted 4 years 5 months ago
    Great memory inducing article! I used to draw my own comics and pass them around school. Eventually I got them published in the school papers in Junior High and High School. Here's just a few:

    -The Bumbling Bee: Like the Tick meets Spider-Man. His arch-enemy was "The Swatter", but after The Bee got rid of his alien black costume (total rip-off) it went to his enemy who became "SPLAT!".

    -Trion Squad 1: Rebels from the Planet Trion named Ultimate Granite(The Thing), CySect(Kamen/Masked Rider) and Illusion Man(Mysterio) who defended Earth from their home planet who was set to invade. I even made my own action figures of these guys.

    -Knight Blade: Batman rip-off that originally looked like Shadowhawk from Image, but when I realized this I upgraded him to Knightfall/Azrael armor. He fought "The Psychotic" who was like Mankind meets Phantom of the Opera.

    So many more, but I don't want to steal your thunder. Great article!
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